i needs advice....

yo homies, i know its a lil late for vateltines day n sh**, but i still needs advice for my boo. check it check so muh screenname on here is remix cuz i likes to make remix songs. and i made a romatic remix off a bombass hit and i needs ta know if ya think i should play this song for my boo on our anneversary. here is the song.....

i been poppin muh collar since the wiki-wiki(record scratch sound)
i been squeezing my douche bottle since the third grade. wiki-wiki sque-squeezing muh douche bottle since the 3rd grade... since the 3rd grade.

yo jus hit me up lemme know what cha think.